The just-the-(new)-facts-ma’am approach Kinsley suggests, at once both intimate and impassive, works spectacularly well for blogs—whose authors tend to benefit from the form’s lack of structural constraint, and whose readers tend to appreciate the social aspects of narrative familiarity. Reading a blog, commenting on it, being a part of it in some way, becomes an implicit act of community. Making today’s journalist, OJR’s Robert Niles put it in a post this morning, a community organizer. He’s not merely a detached informer, but rather a social actor in the Gladwellian model—maven, salesman, and connector rolled into one.
This sensibility—a contemporary, Web-enabled iteration of the public journalism model of the ‘90s—is increasingly common, and increasingly a component of meta-media’s conventional wisdom. In journalism generally, across outlets and platforms, we’re seeing a trajectory toward interpersonal familiarity in journalistic narratives—toward, essentially, social news. Blogs are increasingly plentiful, and prominent, on newspaper sites. More and more journalists are active on Facebook and Twitter. News startups are marketing themselves not merely as information-providers, but as, indeed, community-builders. (California Watch, for example, whose site debuted in hard-launch form this week with the tag line “Bold new journalism,” is selling itself not only as a committed watchdog outfit working in the public interest, but also as a social space on the Web. “Thanks everyone for checking out www.californiawatch.org! We launched with great stories, close to 20 databases, cool resources, two blogs,” went a Monday tweet. Later: “@andrewspittle: we’re eager for feedback because we will make changes based on it :-)”)
This is, generally speaking, to the good—to the great, really. But social news is a model that, for all its myriad and obvious benefits, doesn’t apply wholesale—and, crucially, shouldn’t apply wholesale—to newspapers. Newspapers should certainly care, deeply so, about what their readers want; it doesn’t follow, however, that their articles’ narrative structure—which exists as a way of navigating the classic tensions involved in winning trust, balancing personal expertise with objectivity (or whatever we want to call it now), balancing context with readability, etc.—needs to transform itself to reflect that concern.
It’s not merely a matter of form—the simple fact that print papers, lacking the luxury of links, can’t tell their stories iteratively (or “modularly,” as Spencer Ackerman had it), and must therefore be comprehensive in a way that individual blog posts don’t have to be. It’s also, and more significantly, a matter of the authority that comes not from familiarity—but from the absence of it.
Papers, when compared to blogs, make relatively few assumptions about their readers. While a blogger might—though not always—have a particular kind of person in mind when considering her “audience,” a newspaper reporter, ideally, writes for the broad, vague audience that is The Public. His narrative is predicated not on familiarity with his readers, but rather—to use that increasingly fraught term—on detachment from them. “I have basically no idea who you are, or what your politics are, or your beliefs,” he says to his readers, “but here’s a version, vetted by myself and my organization’s editorial infrastructure, of what happened earlier today/yesterday/this past week.”
Since the reporter can make so few safe assumptions about his audience as he makes this declaration, he tries to make his narrative, via context-heavy prose and the inclusion of expert opinion and the like, accessible to as broad and generalized a public as possible. (This is particularly so for The New York Times and The Washington Post, the papers called out in Kinsley’s column, which are not merely big-city metros, but also national papers of record.) In this way, and through this process, he defines himself through his detachment from the niche. He presents himself as an occupant of, and aspirant toward, the meta-niche.
There are flaws in this system, to be sure: Newspapers’ all-things-to-all-people pretensions (and that’s the way it is, etc., to mix mediums) have played a large part in journalism’s broad crisis in authority. And their stories—as news stories in any other form—will always, and necessarily, be somewhat arbitrary about the information they include and exclude from their narratives.

This was a great analysis/rebuttal of the Kinsley piece in the Atlantic. When I read it yesterday, I naturally agreed with the just-the-facts-ma'am proposal but only because I read the news regularly.
For me, hearing that there was "a sweeping overhaul of the nation’s health care system" is a few seconds longer and somewhat more annoying than reading "Health reform was passed yesterday." But of course, not everyone will have followed the health care debate from beginning to end and may want to know why it is significant. Also, like you mentioned, the newspapers Kinsley calls out serve as papers of record. When we look back on the health care reform bill 30 years from now, we will want a bit more context than what a blog or Twitter post can offer. ("OMG Dems totelly enact death panels, lolz.")
So often, when I'm reading a blog and the writer is commenting on the latest development in a long, drawn-out affair, they will simply link to the NYT article that gives proper background so that the blog can focus on a quick response. But if Kinsley wants newspapers -- and their websites, I presume -- to adopt the blog formula and only print the latest developments, who is going to paint the full picture for us?
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ishmael
#1 Posted by ishmael daro, CJR on Thu 7 Jan 2010 at 06:37 PM
Excellent piece. The worries you highlight are very real. However, I'm not sure it's entirely unreasonable, ishmael and Megan, to ask our newspapers of record to provide the updates in one easily-accessible location, and the backgrounder somewhere nearby.
#2 Posted by hayles, CJR on Thu 7 Jan 2010 at 08:12 PM
Thanks, hayles. It's certainly not unreasonable to ask for a more efficient division between new developments and background--in fact, it's preferable. (Alternatively, there's the Wikipedia model, which achieves narrative efficiency precisely by collapsing those divisions. See Wikipedia's explanation of the healthcare debate compared to...all of newspapers' explanations, combined.)
But those alternative narrative structures are only practical--only possible--online. As Greg pointed out the other day, newspapers still have print subscribers--lots of them--and, in the stories they produce, have to look out for those readers' interests, too.
And great points, Ishmael. One of the ironies of the Kinsley piece is that an essay arguing for the abbreviation of context...abbreviates its context. It's easy to pick on newspapers for all the reasons Kinsley gave and more; but the point he doesn't make in his column--and it's a big one--is the crucial contextual role that newspapers play in today's media ecology. That role transcends the many--but perhaps necessary--shortcomings of their narrative structure.
Kthxbai!
#3 Posted by Megan Garber, CJR on Fri 8 Jan 2010 at 12:07 AM
I can't decide whether I enjoy the crazy-long length, the impenetrable language, or the haughty tone of yesteryear most in this article. Perhaps I should skim it again.
#4 Posted by Hildy Burns, CJR on Sat 9 Jan 2010 at 11:18 AM
If I had to guess, Hildy, I'd say it's 'the haughty tone of yesteryear.' But by all means, feel free to take another pass and report back on your findings. Thanks for skimming!
#5 Posted by Megan Garber, CJR on Sat 9 Jan 2010 at 02:35 PM
... a newspaper reporter, ideally, writes for the broad, vague audience that is The Public. His narrative is predicated not on familiarity with his readers, but rather—to use that increasingly fraught term—on detachment from them. “I have basically no idea who you are, or what your politics are, or your beliefs,” he says to his readers ...
There could be no greater indictment of modern newspaper writing than this passage. Any writer who starts off not knowing who he's writing for has already failed his readers.
This detached voice, this attempt to be "accessible to as broad and generalized a public as possible" exists solely because of a very brief and peculiar economic period in the industry's history when, after it already been eclipsed as the public's primary news source by television, most newspaper markets were reduced to monopoly or at best JOA duopoly situations. Distinctiveness didn't matter anymore when there was no competition, and the only way to expand circ and print more money with your monopoly was to offend the least number of people possible.
Go back and read the papers of the 1930s and 1940s (or any period in American history before 1960), when there was true competition for readership and you'll see that very few of them are detached.
#6 Posted by Chip Bayers, CJR on Sat 9 Jan 2010 at 06:49 PM
I have never heard the word "kerfuffle" used in conversation. It is a literary construct, not the stuff of off-hand conversation. At least in any circle I've traveled in.
Also, when I was in college, we used to run Kinsley's New Republic columns on our op-ed page, and he was always far too long, so he got cut. That Kinsley spends 1,808 words telling us we need to write shorter is the height of irony.
#7 Posted by Bryan M., CJR on Mon 11 Jan 2010 at 12:12 PM
What Kinsley advocates has already been done for years by the British quality papers, which omit background and disdain objectivity, on the assumption that their readers follow the news closely and agree with them politically. Given the 20-year decline in newspaper readership, this may be where we're headed.
One more point: The Washington Post, unlike the New York Times, is NOT a national newspaper of record. It chose in the 1980s to limit its circulation to the Washington area, and is hard to find elsewhere.
#8 Posted by Al Horne, CJR on Mon 11 Jan 2010 at 01:31 PM