The New York Times posts a nasty correction on its Sunday op-ed by William Deresiewicz, who asserted that a study had found that 10 percent of people on Wall Street were “clinical psychopaths.”
That 10-percent-psycho baloney was the lead anecdote—critical framing for the whole op-ed. The Times has since re-written the lede paragraph almost entirely, disappeared the errors, and attached a correction at the very end of the story:
An earlier version of this article misstated the findings of a 2010 study on psychopathy in corporations. The study found that 4 percent of a sample of 203 corporate professionals met a clinical threshold for being described as psychopaths, not that 10 percent of people who work on Wall Street are clinical psychopaths. In addition, the study, in the journal Behavioral Sciences and the Law, was not based on a representative sample; the authors of the study say that the 4 percent figure cannot be generalized to the larger population of corporate managers and executives.
That’s not good enough. Here’s the original lede, which I snagged via Factiva:
THERE is an ongoing debate in this country about the rich: who they are, what their social role may be, whether they are good or bad. Well, consider the following. A recent study found that 10 percent of people who work on Wall Street are ”clinical psychopaths,” exhibiting a lack of interest in and empathy for others and an ”unparalleled capacity for lying, fabrication, and manipulation.” (The proportion at large is 1 percent.) Another study concluded that the rich are more likely to lie, cheat and break the law.
Here’s the lede, as rewritten:
THERE is an ongoing debate in this country about the rich: who they are, what their social role may be, whether they are good or bad. Well, consider the following. A 2010 study found that 4 percent of a sample of corporate managers met a clinical threshold for being labeled psychopaths, compared with 1 percent for the population at large. (However, the sample was not representative, as the study’s authors have noted.) Another study concluded that the rich are more likely to lie, cheat and break the law.
The NYT is effectively saying, “We originally said a study found 10 percent of Wall Streeters were psychopaths. But that was false. It really said 4 percent of executives are psychopaths. But even then, the study was not based on a representative sample, according to its own authors, which means that it’s just bullshit, which means that this op-ed is fatally flawed.”
But rather than say something like that, the paper just rewrites the false part—without noting it has done so until and unless you get to the very bottom of the piece. The Gray Lady doesn’t do strikethroughs, you know.
The “study” the original NYT piece linked to was an article in CFA Institute magazine, as Edward Jay Epstein writes at The Daily Beast. Actually, Epstein writes that the Times linked to an aggregated version of CFA’s story that ran in The Week, which itself was aggregating the story via other aggregators.
In other words, the Times’s false information was sourced from The Week, which sourced it, via aggregated posts at master aggregators Business Insider and Huffington Post, from CFA Institute magazine which sourced it, erroneously, from “Studies conducted by Canadian forensic psychologist Robert Hare.”
This is telephone, press style. The Times was at least four derivative sources removed from the original source of the information. If anyone along the way messed it up, as the first reporter did, the whole chain was vulnerable. Some editor at the Times should have noticed that the column’s most eye-opening claim, one on which it hung its whole thesis, was sourced not to the APA or some academic journal, but to The Week, which in turn was sourcing it on down the line.
This isn’t to say that columnists and bloggers have to re-report everything that has already been reported elsewhere. But editors have to fact check the lede graph of a provocative, edited column in your paper of record that accuses a big chunk of people of being “clinical psychopaths.”

Nice catch, Ryan. The "correction" is just a softer version of the original falsehood. But your headline gives the NYT too much credit, as if it were simply stricken with a rare case of editorial quackery, or it merely fumbled this one. The NYT is one of those govt-compliant outlets that teamed up with the Feds to lie, via omission and subterfuge, about WMDs, wiretaps, and other matters of "national security," and still uses omission and subterfuge to conceal lies and crimes committed by the Feds and their non-govt accomplices and enablers. As company policy, the NYT refuses to allow the word torture when describing govt torture of terrorist suspects; etc. And I'm just talking about the Bush and Obama administrations; read Glenn Greenwald, Counterpunch.org, or LewRockwell.com for more examples of NYT fraud throughout its history.
#1 Posted by Dan A., CJR on Fri 18 May 2012 at 05:20 PM
I offer the following as an example of low quality in American journalism. It is bad enough that in his incoherent commentary Dan Abrams could not get the statute right--it is very obviously garbled, visible from even a superficial reading--but he apparently does not even bother to proof his text after it has been posted.
Where ABC editors are on such a sensitive legal story is a mystery.
By ABC News May 18, 2012 2:27pm Trayvon Martin Case: Does Zimmerman’s Self Defense Claim Depend on Who Started the Fight?
By DAN ABRAMS, ABC News Legal Consultant
...The Florida Stand your Ground Law passed in 2005 reads as follows:
A person who is not engaged in an unlawful activity and who is attacked in any other place where he or she has a right to be has no duty to retreat and has the right to stand his or her ground and meet force with force, including deadly force or herself or another or to prevent the commission of a forcible felony.
The NYT is equally adrift. Except for Winerip, the education reporting is too bad to mention. I read the UK Guardian and Telegraph religiously online, but I only consult The NYT to marvel at the triviality.
#2 Posted by Clayton Burns, CJR on Fri 18 May 2012 at 05:49 PM
Craig, Thanks for your response. The error in quoting the statute in the Dan Abrams commentary has still not been corrected, nor is it possible to reach ABC by any method I have tried, nor does ABC post comment on the error.
I am going to recommend at Poynter, Nieman, and CJR that all serious journalism programs establish a course in narrative so as to help students focus on detail and on language.
I consider Kipling to be the world's best journalist (as a writer), so I would pick the new Penguin "The Man Who Would Be King: Selected Stories of Rudyard Kipling" as my lead text. McPhee's "Encounters with the Archdruid" is a powerful model, as is Lawson's "The Brotherhoods." In terms of American style, the Lydia Davis translation of Flaubert's "Madame Bovary" (adjusted paperback text) is exceptionally good. "The Turn of the Screw" by Henry James requires a lot of concentration and skill in language and reasoning. I am in the middle of my third reading of "The Hunger Games" (the first novel), which I recommend for close reading (out loud).
Nieman, CJR, and Poynter should set up language columns, not mere notes on usage. Over the past 20 years we have had remarkable developments in corpus linguistics, especially with the COBUILD grammars. The COBUILD English Grammar should be official for all journalism schools in America, along with the Longman Dictionary of Contemporary English. Not only would students in journalism benefit from tapping into these texts, but they would also be ready to make accurate assessments of language issues if they became education reporters.
Education is a huge economics story that is being mishandled in the press. Despite the massive UK coverage (initiated by The Daily Telegraph) over the past six months of lapses in education, there has been little or no progress in pinpointing the weaknesses of factitious teaching tools. The UK coverage has not generalized to the US. I blame The NYT for that.
It has been my experience that journalists do like good texts, such as McPhee's "Encounters." However, I have yet to meet a journalist who understands in detail the difference between the COBUILD English Grammar and an SAT manual, or who knows what to do about the chaos in attribution and information management at The NYT and ABC. Thanks! Clayton.
By ABC News
May 18, 2012 2:27pm
Trayvon Martin Case: Does Zimmerman’s Self Defense Claim Depend on Who
Started the Fight?
By DAN ABRAMS, ABC News Legal Consultant
The Florida Stand your Ground Law passed in 2005 reads as follows:
A person who is not engaged in an unlawful activity and who is
attacked in any other place where he or she has a right to be has no
duty to retreat and has the right to stand his or her ground and meet
force with force, including deadly force or herself or another or to
prevent the commission of a forcible felony.
The 2011 Florida Statutes
Title XLVI
CRIMES
Chapter 776
JUSTIFIABLE USE OF FORCE
(3) A person who is not engaged in an unlawful activity and who is
attacked in any other place where he or she has a right to be has no
duty to retreat and has the right to stand his or her ground and meet
force with force, including deadly force if he or she reasonably
believes it is necessary to do so to prevent death or great bodily
harm to himself or herself or another or to prevent the commission of
a forcible felony.
#3 Posted by Clayton Burns, CJR on Sat 19 May 2012 at 12:01 PM
It's unfortunate that a sensationalist headline "10% of wall street executives are psychos" will discredit a body of research that's forming showing that executives who are successful in the current corporate climate might be a little different from you and I. From the psychcentral site which debunked the claim, you have research indicating the rich are less empathetic:
http://psychcentral.com/news/2011/08/10/the-rich-are-different-they-may-be-less-empathetic/28493.html
Is the lack of empathy a ticket to wealth or is wealth a ticket to decreased empathy? We don't know, but what we do know is that, "One implication of this, Keltner said, is that’s unreasonable to structure a society on the hope that rich people will help those less fortunate.
“One clear policy implication is, the idea of nobless oblige or trickle-down economics, certain versions of it, is bull,” Keltner said.
“Our data say you cannot rely on the wealthy to give back. The ‘thousand points of light’—this rise of compassion in the wealthy to fix all the problems of society—is improbable, psychologically.”
The ability to rise in class is the great promise of the “American Dream.” But studies have found that, as people rise in the classes, they become less empathetic."
And then there are other studies done of British executives which appear robust:
http://www.guardian.co.uk/commentisfree/2011/nov/07/one-per-cent-wealth-destroyers
"In a study published by the journal Psychology, Crime and Law, Belinda Board and Katarina Fritzon tested 39 senior managers and chief executives from leading British businesses. They compared the results to the same tests on patients at Broadmoor special hospital, where people who have been convicted of serious crimes are incarcerated. On certain indicators of psychopathy, the bosses's scores either matched or exceeded those of the patients. In fact, on these criteria, they beat even the subset of patients who had been diagnosed with psychopathic personality disorders.
The psychopathic traits on which the bosses scored so highly, Board and Fritzon point out, closely resemble the characteristics that companies look for. Those who have these traits often possess great skill in flattering and manipulating powerful people. Egocentricity, a strong sense of entitlement, a readiness to exploit others and a lack of empathy and conscience are also unlikely to damage their prospects in many corporations."
That anti-social beings seem to thrive in anti-social structures, who base their superiority solely on the amount of capital they extract from the world around them, just might just be a valid observation of Anglo Saxon capitalism at work.
#4 Posted by Thimbles, CJR on Sat 19 May 2012 at 03:03 PM
I think people who spam are psychopaths.
#5 Posted by Thimbles, CJR on Sat 19 May 2012 at 10:14 PM
OK, but really, there's an additional problem you also are a part of, in even giving credence to these phony-baloney psychological-industry neologisms in the first place. The study is crap no matter how you parse it.
#6 Posted by Anonymous, CJR on Tue 22 May 2012 at 06:56 PM